I will provide the critics that were given by the teacher. please edit the paper to that the mistakes are corrected
areas of improvement include:
The memo is well-researched and documented, meaning it: Β uses a number of references that are credible, address appropriate subject matter, and are listed in your Reference section, Β includes in-text citations that comply with APA standards, Β provides references that meet the number and type of references required for the assignment and that comply with APA requirements.
teacher comment on material above: Some additional citations are needed, for instance in this paragraph: Most health programs offered to the homeless lack the ability to treat both substance abuse disorder and mental illness at the same time, leaving a large portion of the homelss community untreatable. Most states lack the systems to move funds from state hospitals tocommunity programs while keeping both running simultaneously. This leads to commuity health centers not receiving sufficient financial resources to treat and help the most vulnerable people. After the closing of a hospital in Philadelphia, 50 million dollars was transferred to local community health pr
ograms. This was found to have positively affected the crucial treatment needed by the homeless community.
The Background section is well-developed and summarizes details/statistics about your chosen public and describes a specific concern of/challenge for your public.
Teacher comments:
The Background Section is great. My only comment is related to including more in-text citations. In addition, because you are suggesting treating people using the dual diagnosis, you need to let us know what percentage of people who are homeless are likely to suffer from both mental health issues and substance abuse.
The Solution section is well-developed and describes one existing solution for addressing the issue/challenge faced by your public by providing details/facts/evidence to support your description of the existing solution and using multiple sources to support your discussion/points.
Teacher comments
You havenΒt described in sufficient detail (to provide the level of complexity and analysis required by the assignment) the treatment itself, nor covered the advantages and disadvantages of one solution (also required by the assignment).
I have attached the file of the essay that needs editing