Do one page for each paper pasted to this order. One for Catlin and one for Bryan answering the for questions pasted below.
Peer Response
Click File>Make a
Copy to make a copy of this file that you can edit and use it. Be sure to
make as many copies as you will need for each of your peer group so that you
can give everyone in your group feedback (this is usually 3-4 people). So, make
3 copies, title them with the name of the person you are responding to and
after you complete the peer response, click Share, change restrictions so
anyone with the link can view and copy the link and share it with your
classmate.
This is the first Peer
Response for your Research Paper. Peer Responses help us grow in our
writing. Peer Responses give you a chance to get feedback from someone other
than your instructor and give you practice in responding and thinking about
writing from a different position. This Peer Response will take place within
your Research Paper Group that you have met with the last t
wo
weeks.
You will read the papers
from your classmates from each of the 3-4 other members of your Research Paper
Group. Please answer the following questions for each paper and return your
comments about the paper on this form to your classmates today.
Writers Name:
Reader Name:
1.How effectively has the writer
advocated for or argued for their position? Is there a clear thesis
statement?
2.Use of Sources: How useful are
the sources that the writer has chosen? Should they be selecting more or
less sources? Different sources? Are the sources effectively woven into
the text that the author is writing? Why or why not? What would make the
use of sources better in the next draft?
3.Organization and Paragraph
Development: Has the author maintained a clear focus on their paper
with each body paragraph supporting that focus and the overall thesis? Has
the author used a counter argument at all?
4.What one suggestion would you
make to the writer before they turn in their next draft of this
essay?